The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/09
How special to share God's glory with your little one.I really liked it. Good descriptions and a wait to see what Sally saw!
11/02/09
I like your metaphor of, "the forest seemed to just swallow them up.." It's fun to see things through a child's eyes and the excitement that watching deer from a forest can bring.
Good story, though I noticed that some of your quote marks are out of place. Keep writing! It is a very nice storyline.