The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/09
Good message in your poem!
11/02/09
This is beautiful and the meter and pattern very unusual. It reads smoothly and sends a great message, one we all need reminding of now and again. Because of the flow, this was fun to read. Super job.
11/03/09
Great truths in this simple poem. I liked it.