The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice balance between dialogue and description, which kept the story moving and easy to read. A few spelling mistakes though that you might want to watch for next time.
Good positive ending!
10/30/09
Good Story. Dad handled it well. Keep it up.
11/01/09
A good account of how a parent should handle such situations, not letting the son off the hook, but giving solutions at the same time.