The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/09
Well written and clever.
11/01/09
Interesting story with a twist at the end I wasn't expecting. My attention was held to the very end to see where you were going.
11/03/09
a lovely beautiful and touching story thank you!
11/03/09
Neat story line and good use of topic. Easy to read and good lesson at the end.