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10/29/09
Thanks for this piece that reminds us that the Shepherd knows what path we should take and will gently guide us there.
10/29/09
WOW! I felt the peace of which you wrote. Good job!
10/29/09
good job of painting this picture to convey what our perspective should really be in the day to day.
10/30/09
Nice job of unpacking this favored Psalm.
10/30/09
What a beautiful word picture of peace. Peace so often sought after and to easily lost. Good job.
10/30/09
Lovely picture. Well done.
10/31/09
Fresh look at a favorite psalm...we should all imagine being sheep and get a new perspective on our lives...thanks for sharing this lovely insight.
10/31/09
Very original--looking at the 23rd Psalm from the POV of a sheep!

When writing in first person, be careful about beginning too many sentences with "I".

This is well done--keep writing!
11/04/09
Great comparison and story.

Loved it.

Keep up the good work!

May God bless.
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship