The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/09
This reminded me a verse I hadn't thought about for along while..."The Lord is my light and my salvation, Whom shall I fear..." Good job.
10/27/09
The lightness talking her through the darkness was lovely.

You started her out with a psychologist working with her phobia, but ended with it being only a dream. It's best to avoid the "dream" scenario--it's been done far too often in fiction.

Wonderful that she was able to find help conquering her phobia.
10/29/09
Wonderfully written... I think we've all been there.