The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/05
This is sooooo beautiful..I dearly loved your story. Close to my heart. So far my favorite. The charactor's the set up from beginning to the ending. Wonderful. God bless ya, littlelight
08/24/05
this is a beautiful, touching story. thank you
08/24/05
What a beautiful story. I loved the ending!
08/24/05
Very well done! A wonderfully written story of true sacrifice.
08/25/05
Wonderful story and lesson. I thoroughly enjoyed it start to finish. Great work!
08/25/05
Very nice, I'd expect to see writing like this up a level or two.
08/25/05
Absolutely beautiful! A winner for sure. Great writing, great story!
Very enjoyable and with such a great message. You don't belong in Beginners. Great work!
I so enjoyed this story; luggage and missions seem to go together. Very good writing, how Daphne started her trip less than thrilled but by the end you have developed such a maturity and compassion in her.
08/27/05
very nice. I liked the way the story kept moving. Strong message.
08/27/05
I loved this! a favorite this week for sure!
08/28/05
I agree with some of the others...you should consider moving up a level. Your article is beautiful and stirs the heart. Thanks for sharing your talent.
08/28/05
Beautiful! What more can I say that hasn't already been said. Very touching.
08/30/05
WOW! Congrats on your win. I think this deserved 1st place. But I'm not a judge.
congratulations! this was well deserved. GREAT STORY! VERY WELL WRITTEN!