The Official Writing Challenge
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You can write a book out of these stories! Your writing is effectively good. God has given you the talent and gift of writing. As your reader, I most enjoyed, "Man on the Street" series (I kinda' traced who the author is ").

Keep writing for the honour and glory of God.

What's next after Reggie's conversion to giving his life to Jesus Christ? :)



10/27/09
A cute story--what a conversion experience!

I didn't understand the last sentence at all--that's the danger if your write part of a series that your reader hasn't read. And your previous commenter has figured out who you are; this is also a problem in a contest which is supposed to be anonymous. No big deal, but if you use continuing characters, make sure each story can stand alone.

I like your voice a great deal; you're a good writer.
10/27/09
A real cute piece.Write on.