The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/09
Well written! I wish there wasn't hate and prejudice in the world. Thanks for writing this.
10/27/09
I so much appreciate the narrator's attitude!

I'm not sure how old she is, but many times her use of language seems far beyond her years. An easy fix: establish that she's writing this as an adult, remembering her childhood days.

Beautiful writing, and it made my heart ache.
10/27/09
One wonders how often this scenerio plays out,I'm sure many times a day. Good writing.