The Official Writing Challenge
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Very descriptive. Great use of words to "show" the setting. Hopeful ending. Well done!
10/27/09
Intriguing and moody...is it an allegory about depression? I read it twice, enjoying it very much, but not entirely sure if I was interpreting it correctly.

Excellent writing.
10/27/09
Well done.