The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my, this is precious! I love a good animal story, and this one didn't disappoint.

You shared some wisdom about owning a dog, or any pet, as well.

The ending is adorable. Two thumbs up.
10/27/09
Three words: I LOVE IT!
10/27/09
Once you lay eyes on them, they climb into your heart. Very well done.
Very, very clever and well written. This not only pulls on the heart strings, but delivers a powerful lesson as well. Great job, indeed!
10/28/09
Sweet story, and really great ending! Made me smile.
10/28/09
We all love Luci. Cute story.
10/28/09
OK, I think I've chosen my favorite "tug-at-your-heart-strings" story! Being an almost rabid (no pun intended) dog lover myself, and having lost my little Yorkie last year, I could absolutely relate to everything in this story. And of course, I also said I would never go through another heartbreak again. Yet here I am, new mother to a five year old big lug-of-a-golden retriever who needed a home. You did a great job communicating the pain & gain of loving a dog. I do hope you place with this entry, and by all means - keep writing!