The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/09
Beautiful descriptions! A little more action or conflict would be a good contrast against the peaceful night sky. Keep up the good writing.
10/27/09
Wonderful musings. Good descriptions. God's creation is trily amazing.Well done.
10/27/09
So sorry, Truly amazing!
10/28/09
Beautiful descriptions!

I agree with Yvonne...this was almost TOO much description, though. Add some characters, some dialogue, or even just some additional actions to really reel in your readers.

Your writing ability is first rate.