The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/09
This is a beautifully crafted peice of writing and I love the rich descriptions of the lights strung out like jewels. I could imagine myself taking that flight with you! I suppose you need to be sitting on the correct side of the plane to see that amazing spectacle!
10/27/09
This was so well written. Thanks for taking me along on a glorious night flight.
Some very excellent examples of light against black.
10/28/09
What a lovely story! Beautiful descriptions.

An extra click of the "enter" key to create white space between paragraphs would be much appreciated.

I'd love to see that sight!