The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/09
Wow! Well done! He showed love instead of telling...much more effective! Keep up the good writing.
10/27/09
Excellent.Love moves mountains and demonstrators!
10/28/09
Wonderful twist, and very well-told story.

Was there a reason for the MC's name to be "Socrates" backwards? Just curious.
Terry, I enjoyed your story very much. You had that little "ah ha" at the end which was not easily anticipated. Good job.