The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/09
What a great ending of hope! I was hoping for a few examples of your ups-and-downs. Keep writing!
10/27/09
Good writing. Several people have used 'learnt'when it should be learned. You probably already caught it.
10/28/09
This is gripping--I'd have loved to read more of this story--what precisely led you to such despair?

To the above commenter: "learnt" is acceptable, especially in UK English.

You're a good writer--write more, and longer!
10/28/09
Good work. It's important for us to know that God does reach us in and from those dark places. People will be blessed to learn this from your writing.