The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/09
Very good and desriptive writing, very relevant to topic. My favorite line: Before time, before form, there was absolute nothing, except Him. You brought us there in your story.
10/26/09
Good writing!
10/28/09
Well done!
An excellent exercise in enabling the reader to live a very intense experience. You have a real gift.
Thank you for a wonderful underground journey! I felt like I was there, in the dark - hearing the drips, smelling the musty odor, feeling the grit beneath my knees. Description is definitely one of your strengths. Good work!
11/03/09
You have a very descriptive, evocative style that brings readers with you. Very good work last week as well.