The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/09
Good thoughts and descriptions.
10/28/09
God always has purpose for our pain and it is often so that we can help others in the future. Your poem was a good way of expressing such thought.
10/28/09
Very good--to compare your pre-Christ life to a black hole.

This poem is sometimes rhymed and metered, sometimes not, so it's a little distracting to the reader.

Wonderful thoughts and sentiments!