The Official Writing Challenge
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10/22/09
I love the concept and the words. Very thought provoking. The meter seems disjointed, not as consistant as it could be.
10/26/09
Good action words and descriptions.Great Truth.
10/28/09
Good job with the parallel between the earth's nothingness before God, and your own.