The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 236 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
10/26/09
Another realistic black picture. Good ending Jesus is the answer and light.
10/28/09
Very emotional and raw...well done with that aspect.

I would have liked to know her better...what was her name? What specific things happened to her? And I'm not sure if "slowly, deliberately" are the best words to describe "falling".

This was riveting and compelling, and my heart went out to her.