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10/22/09
This was a concise and powerful piece. The subject in the beginning was as sordid as the end is beautiful. I loved the play on metaphors, how the woman opened a different door than the literal door that sin and hurt came knocking on. You evoked my compassion for her, for the need to be loved and the pain of finding it in the wrong place. Because of this, I felt real satisfaction when she meets Jesus. I even felt anger toward the guy and wished ungodly thoughts on him!
10/22/09
The man was the backslider and God used him, who should have known better, to bring this woman, who wasn't a Christian at first, to a saving faith. Concise and life giving.
10/26/09
Well written.This happens more than we know . A lesson here guard your heart!
10/26/09
nicely done way of showing how God even uses people's sin to draw others to Himself. nicely told from that viewpoint, too.
10/27/09
Very moody and well-done.