The Official Writing Challenge
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10/15/09
I have seen others write about how a person would come up with something to write re the FW Writing Challenge topic of the week. I think it is a fun way of writing and I see that in the end, Barbara finall gave up, I would like to have seen you choose one or two things on the "blue" topic to concentrate on. I don't know how much you could have expanded your excitement about the wren, but that is the thing I found most concrete and interesting in your story. You showed the beauty of the bird, the desire to photograph it and how the family was so enthralled in its beauty. That part of your story held my attention and was written very well. Keep writing!
10/18/09
I liked the workings of your mind in blue.Fun!
10/21/09
The title's catchy and straightforward. However, I felt that many expressions throughout the story could have been presented more simply...thus more efficiently. What calls for appreciation, though, is the constant determination you display for improvement in your writing style. Keep it up! :)