The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, a deeply moving poem. Good writing.
10/18/09
Very touching. You capture the love of all who have miscarried or lost a baby!
10/19/09
That was a touching poem.
10/19/09
Excellent heartfelt poem that would help others know it's okay to long and miss and then reconcile. Be careful of staying in the same tense, at least in the same stanza...

"Blue was the color of the shoes
That belong to the boy that should be mine
The shoes are all I have left,
of my little boy, gone before his time."

...that belonged to the boy that should have been mine, would fit.