The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/09
Cute. Nice job building the mystery - and the relationship between these two.
10/21/09
I thought this was a cute little story,Maybe the start of a French Romance!
10/23/09
Nice story. I liked the line "Only if you're a smirf." lol!

Might could have a little stronger ending, say tie it to the beginning of the story with her being not quite so "blue" because she made a new friend. Just a suggestion :-)

Good job and keep writing!