The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/09
You have some wonderful description in your story. That definately adds to the quality of the piece and makes it an enjoyable read.
10/18/09
Wow this person so needed to retire! Very cute ending.
10/21/09
a very funny peice! I could see the comedy unfolding before my eyes! Oh dear how sad that she has such dreams when she should be relaxing. I especially like the description of the monster alarm clock!