The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/09
Disturbing beginning and great ending. Words certainly are to make us feel things, and I felt uncomfortable at best.

It's true, we must not even hold our spouses in higher regard than God.
10/19/09
Whew!!
You really held my attention on this. You should expand on this. It is good reading for a book.
10/22/09
Congratulations on your Highly Commended win this week...your all too real tragic story was emotion-packed and I loved the tender moments with Pooker and her dad at the end. Really good job!
10/23/09
You had me gripped with fear from your first word to your last. The only thing I would mention is that it seemed like you were changing tenses, but that could just be me. This is one of the most intriguing stories I have read in the Writers Challenge. Laura