The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/09
Disturbing beginning and great ending. Words certainly are to make us feel things, and I felt uncomfortable at best.

It's true, we must not even hold our spouses in higher regard than God.
Whew!!
You really held my attention on this. You should expand on this. It is good reading for a book.
10/22/09
Congratulations on your Highly Commended win this week...your all too real tragic story was emotion-packed and I loved the tender moments with Pooker and her dad at the end. Really good job!
10/23/09
You had me gripped with fear from your first word to your last. The only thing I would mention is that it seemed like you were changing tenses, but that could just be me. This is one of the most intriguing stories I have read in the Writers Challenge. Laura