The Official Writing Challenge
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I really loved this!

I really thought this line says it all ....

"Even though I failed Him even more, He gave me eyes to see.
That with forgiveness and a humbled heart, He gave me victory."

Great job, these types of poems are very hard to master ... and I think you did a great job at it.
10/18/09
This is the talent of great hymn and song writers. You captured every essence of this portion of scripture.
10/19/09
thank you a great poem and I love the title too. Thanks!