The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/09
Last paragraph definitely the strongest. Great use of contrasting metaphor. Really paints a vivid picture for us.
10/18/09
Nice work. I often have thanked God for that blue especially in Colorado one Thanksgiving.
10/19/09
I like this one ... going into my top list ... not that I am on the judging panel... well we will see if I am right!