The Official Writing Challenge
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08/18/05
I like the characterization of the old lady…more please!
08/18/05
Very sweet :)
08/19/05
I really liked your description of the old lady and her spirituality compared to an eagle. Watch the spelling of lose (as in don't lose your wallet) and loose (as in the belt is loose around your waist).
08/20/05
I liked this story. Would like to hear more.
"Her mind rolled back to years before her body felt like a tattered sheet of paper. Fragile and discolored from time; and like that sheet of paper her life had been touched by many. ... there was still room for script to be written." This painted such a vivid picture! I would have liked to have seen the link with the eagle expanded and made into more of a story. Keep writing!