The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very creative. Love the humor.

You might want to add spaces between the conversational paragraphs next time. Makes it much easier on the eyes when reading.

Thanks for this really fun read.
10/09/09
Nice light hearted article...
having a background in broadcasting I am thinking of times when I held a microphone, did not like doing interviews!
10/11/09
Interesting answers! Made me wonder what sort of answers I'd get.

I think present tense works better for moody pieces that focus on one character. Used here, it almost sounded like you were telling a series of jokes. Try re-writing a paragraph in past tense, and see if it works better for you.

This was a unique approach to "red", and I appreciated it.