The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/09
Oh, very good, and I thank you for leaving your reader to ponder the spiritual applications. Very, very well done.
10/11/09
I liked the comparision of the two rings. I also enjoyed reading about the aunt. She felt so real to me.
10/12/09
Wow! Great story! I was glad the Aunt did not get angry when the ruby ring got lost. The adult rings drama was a real shocker!
10/13/09
I was hoping it would turn out as a story of a lost and found. Like finding the pearl of great price or the ten lost coins. Good story. Thanks - Colin
10/13/09
Well done. Good tie in with the plastic stone.Blessings, ruth