The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/09
Great job with this eerie piece!

I'm not sure what caused the odd formatting, with single words occasionally by themselves in a line. You might want to try the "preview" button before you submit your next entry, so that you can see those little blips and fix them before you submit.

I love the victory at the end!
10/11/09
This was a well-written article. I just have the same suggestion as the person above. Check your formatting before you submit your next article.