The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
This was good, unique story. I enjoyed reading it. You ended the story really well too.
10/10/09
Lovely writing, far above Beginner level. I'm delighted to have read this entry.
10/12/09
Nice description of intimate encounters between a believer and the lover of her soul!
10/13/09
I liked this piece very much!
10/15/09
I like this lovely writing. The only bit I didnt like was the way she went through the glass window like a ghost. Loads of lovely description. a rich velvet peice Lucious!
10/15/09
and well deserved. I didnt get through all the beginners but yours definately stood out.... now you have got to join the intermediates but the good news is that there are less people in there... Welcome!
10/16/09
Not sure if I can appreciate the implications but the piece is well written.
10/16/09
Very descriptive. Very passionate. You had me closing my eyes, and imagining the glory of God still visible, though my eyes were closed. Congratulations on a well deserved win.
10/17/09
Congratulations on your win, Cindy. Thrilling, isn't it! :0)

I had to read your story a few times because some places were confusing for me, but that could just be me--I don't always easily understand someone else's writing. I thought it was creative and well written. Good job.