The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/09
*smile* This would be a great children's story. It helps the reader to have an extra space between paragraphs.
Keep up the good work!
10/11/09
Bird lover's delight!
10/11/09
Very cute!
A good job of writing to the topic. I agree, more white space would make for easier reading. Give Fred some well deserved bird seed.
10/15/09
lovely. Loved the bird descriptions Yes a good kids story , Its a bit like a "just so story"...... We kinda knew he would get picked but the way the story unfolded was lovely and of course has that resonance with any child desperate to be picked out and chosen! will give them all hope and something to strive for. Id like this one to win