The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/09
I never even knew about people cutting until I was involved in trying to help a person who did it, This was realistic and touching. God can heal that too.Blessings to you.
10/11/09
I like the alternating moods. This is very well done.
10/15/09
a powerful and very descriptive peice. I personally got confused by the mixing of the two 'voices' and would have preferred to have had just a single storyline. This was because they were both very powerful on their own.