The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/09
Touching.I would have wanted to say a last word though.
10/11/09
Beautifully, beautifully written.

There was one minor slip out of present tense into past tense...and I always wonder when I read stories like this--if she's dead, how's she writing it? But that's artistic license for you.

This is definitely one of the strongest entries on this level. Very well done.
This is really good. I really enjoyed reading this. :-)
10/11/09
Illness and death touch us all. Thanks for a glimpse into the mind, heart, and soul of one who made the transition from the temporary residence to the eternal!
10/14/09
I appreciate your sensitive approach, for suggesting instead of trying to describe what's beyond description. Well done.
10/15/09
this is really good ! thanks for writing it.