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Realistic depiction of the greatest gift of Love.
Vivid portrayal of Christ's crucifixion.

I'd have liked a translation of the title--I know that "rouge" means "red", but I don't know what "larmes" means.

Very good writing--keep it up!
woo yes. powerful description and there was that sense "is this peice about Jesus" and you kept up the anticipation to the final line. Great without being too melodramatic. I too want to know what the title means!
I also had not thought about Jesus being at "peace" during what must have been the most excruciating pain! And He was not thinking of himself; He was thinking about his mother.

Love google translator, Larmes Rouge, Red Tears!

Beautiful, Terry!