The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/09
Realistic depiction of the greatest gift of Love.
10/11/09
Vivid portrayal of Christ's crucifixion.

I'd have liked a translation of the title--I know that "rouge" means "red", but I don't know what "larmes" means.

Very good writing--keep it up!
10/15/09
woo yes. powerful description and there was that sense "is this peice about Jesus" and you kept up the anticipation to the final line. Great without being too melodramatic. I too want to know what the title means!
10/05/11
I also had not thought about Jesus being at "peace" during what must have been the most excruciating pain! And He was not thinking of himself; He was thinking about his mother.

Love google translator, Larmes Rouge, Red Tears!

Beautiful, Terry!