The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
I appreciate this story simply because it teaches patience, obedience, family, and last, but certainly not least, that Jesus is the light of the world. Well done.
10/09/09
A good reminder to grandparents,share the Light!
10/10/09
A precious message! I could sense the curiosity of the child and her parents. I love happy endings and you "wrapped" it up as nicely as the surprise package!
10/11/09
Definitely a surprise! (How'd the grandma wrap up light, I wonder?)

It'll be easier on your readers' eyes if you put an extra "enter" between paragraphs.

This would be good for a children's Sunday School lesson.
10/15/09
yes i liked this. I felt the annoyance of the child as I too wants to know WHAT was in the box. It could be a sunfday school story but it is a good one for adults as well!