The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
I enjoyed reading this. I am glad that she let go of her anger.
10/11/09
This is a very good story--I hope you consider writing the full 750 words next time! That will give you time to explore your character more fully, and to give a more developed plot to your entry.

Be careful of switching from past to present tense and back again.

I enjoyed reading this, and look forward to more from you in future challenges!