The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/09
You write very well.

I agree. Wearing a special pair of shoes can suddenly lift the spirits and make one feel like a million bucks.
10/08/09
Good Job!
Ohhhh . . .

I think the best line to this whole article is. . .
"There is no place like home". . .

Forget the ruby slippers . . . No clicking needed.

I long to be home with Him!
10/09/09
Your piece is very upbeat.Christian Fashion magazine material.Well done.
10/09/09
Very nice article... I may look for some red accessories to brighten up my otherwise drab wardrobe.
This could be a snippet used in a fasion magazine. It had that magazine article feel to it. Thanks for sharing. :)
10/11/09
Very good! I hope you continue to write here, and to write longer entries--your writing is excellent, and your readers want more!