The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice touch!

You know how to paint with words.

09/18/09
You have a great story with wonderful description. There are a few editing issues. For example, the year should be written as 1940, and her age should be written out as 81 or at least eighty-one. Other than that, though, you have a great story. Thank you for sharing it.