The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/09
This was so sweet. Loved the surprise of who the MC was.
Pain of the empty nest well done.
09/21/09
Well done. Nice surprise of who the MC is.
09/24/09
Congratulations on winning with this sweet story. Like the others, I was surprised at who the MC turned out to be.
A space between paragraphs make for easier reading--for next time.
09/25/09
Oh, my goodness, I was completely taken by surprise at who the MC was. A great story about empty nests. Congratulations on your second place win.
10/14/09
Brilliant. I'm not at all surprised at your second place. You're a wonderful storyteller. I must admit though: I pick the fact that your MC was a magpie right away. Maybe that's because we call all of them maggies over here lol.