The Official Writing Challenge
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This was so sweet. Loved the surprise of who the MC was.
Pain of the empty nest well done.
Well done. Nice surprise of who the MC is.
Congratulations on winning with this sweet story. Like the others, I was surprised at who the MC turned out to be.
A space between paragraphs make for easier reading--for next time.
Oh, my goodness, I was completely taken by surprise at who the MC was. A great story about empty nests. Congratulations on your second place win.
Brilliant. I'm not at all surprised at your second place. You're a wonderful storyteller. I must admit though: I pick the fact that your MC was a magpie right away. Maybe that's because we call all of them maggies over here lol.