The Official Writing Challenge
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09/20/09
What a true-to-life-poem. And you're right - God didn't create retirement. Maybe just another time of life to have an opportunity to do something else, maybe something we really truly love to do? I love your title.
09/21/09
Well written poem. Good choice of words.
Loved the flow of your poem and the words you used.I agree no where in God's word are we called to retire while on earth.