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Very touching story! =)
This brings back some memories. My father-in-law used to drive a church bus, and one day teens were making fun of him, but one girl stepped away from the crowd and told them to stop, because she came from a broken home, and got saved due to his bus ministry. She went over and gave him a big hug, and the others scattered!

Amen for your insight, and well written piece.
09/11/09
Congratulations on how you wove hope into the affection vacuum the two kids had to endure. Well done
very touching
09/13/09
sounds like the home my mom grew up in...she was saved at an early age and when her children were young the church buses came round for them and she found a church home. nicely written and touching story!