The Official Writing Challenge
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A narrative poem! I liked the building of the plot.
Pay attention to your spelling and punctuation. Also, try to make your lines similiar in rhythm.
Keep Writing!
The punctuation is conducive to “hood” or impoverished area, where I grew up in Paterson, NJ. more so… cuss words are more indigenous to the area but I thought it not suiting…not only is the poem a narrative, but in fact a true story that happened I my life… Thank you for your comment, it helps with my work, please review my other poems and critique for as well…GOD BLESS Lliam