The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/09
Interesting POV!
Well written throughout. I especially liked the ending...just enough to hint at what will happen next.
09/16/09
LOL! How fun! I enjoyed this creative and original piece and the ending is just right. I can see this being expanded. Excellent job! ^_^
09/17/09
Cute story. I loved how you ended it. :) good job!