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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Sightseeing (08/08/05)

TITLE: I Needn't Leave
By Ann Grover
08/13/05


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I Needn’t Leave


I saved my pennies and my dimes
A year or two or three,
To satisfy my lifelong dream
Earth’s wonders I would see.

The day arrived! O joy! It dawned!
Departure time had come!
With tickets clasped in eager hands,
My journey had begun!

Westminster Abbey drew a sigh
Of rev’rence from my breast.
A sanctuary, holy, hushed,
Where saints and nobles rest.

Soaring tall, the Eiffel Tower,
In high and mighty style,
Rises o’er the place wherein
The Mona Lisa smiles.

With Caesar’s legions followed I,
Along the Appian Way.
My heart stood still while echoed on
The hooves of ancient days.

Across desert sands stared the Sphinx,
At stony tombs nearby,
Where slaves had toiled and sweat their blood,
So kings, in peace, could lie.

I strolled atop the Chinese wall,
Met Buddha in Beijing.
And gazed upon the golden glow
Of statues, T’ang and Ming.

The camera clicked; the video whirred,
The sights and sounds to save.
Each temple, tomb, and tower,
Each castle, keep, and grave.

Finally, as with all good things,
The end came sure and fast.
World-weary and travel-worn,
My own front door, at last.

And then... a leaf, in slow descent,
Spiraled to my feet.
I picked it up, looked on its face,
Soft fragrance, verdant, sweet.

A map of life was charted there,
And traced within each vein.
A passport to the universe,
A message, pure and plain.

I needn’t leave for foreign shores
Or go to distant lands.
The rarest sights and mysteries
Are held within my hand.


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dub W08/15/05
Well measured until the last three stanzas, but still a good effort, full of meaning, voice, and prosody.
Shari Armstrong 08/18/05
A well written poem -good descriptions of all the locations.
M'Kayla Kelly08/18/05
A nice trip. I enjoyed every moment of it!
Crista Darr08/19/05
Lovely work.
Debra Bowers08/20/05
Charming poem, with smiles in every word! "Very Well Done"
Julianne Jones08/22/05
Very well done. I enjoyed this immensely. Thanks for sharing.
Brandi Roberts09/08/05
Wow, Ann, a well-deserved placing on this one! Would LOVE to read more of your poetry. Encore! Encore!
Brook Phelps03/22/06
I really like the last three stanzas. What a beautiful thought to share especially with those who have never had the opportunity to travel abroad. Best wishes.
Rita Garcia07/04/07
A well deserved placing right out-of-the-gate! I am always sooo in awe of your writing gift with poetry!
Verna Cole Mitchell 07/04/07
You truly showed your talent from the very beginning. The last verse is worthy of Masters before you got there!
Jacquelyn Horne07/04/07
Wonderful poem on God's great wonderful world. All wrapped in a small fallen leaf.
Lynda Lee Schab 07/05/07
Even way back then you were taking home the awards! Geesh! Just more evidence of your God-given talent, Ann. Personally, I loved this poem. A truly beautiful first entry. Nicely done.
Brenda Welc07/07/07
Wow! This was awesome writing!
Belinda Borradaile04/15/11
Goosebumps!
So awesome.
Janice Fitzpatrick06/16/11
Even in beginners you were already a master in writing hon. Wow! Simply breathtakingly wondrous. Wonderful message! Whether story
or poetic verse
your gift is worth more
than what lies in a purse
it flows and ripples
from God's heart
to pen
where it transports beauty
to the hearts of men
thank you for sharing
God's thoughts with so many
they brighten our days like
a shiny new penny...


   
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