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09/10/09
Wow. What a wonderful story. You captured the childlike faith so beautifully!
This is exactly how I would imagine kids to speak. Its like you might have overheard them speak.
09/11/09
Very nice, I like the way it reads, very natural.
Wow, gave me chills! It's amazing but this story seems like a true story...kids do speak this way and it's nice to see how friends with faith can rely on each other. Very nice job!
Great story, it is amazing how you told how kids might realty death and faith to one another

Liz Owen
09/14/09
Very picturesque! The writer sets the scene very vividly in our minds as to the surroundings and mood of the characters. Nice!
09/14/09
Wow. What an awesome piece. It's really nice to see the you portrayed the little girls in midst of their conversation. It's nice to read stuff you can relate to in your own life.
09/16/09
This is a well-written story. I like how the answer comes from another child and not an adult. It makes children feel more independent when someone their own age helps them instead of an adult.
09/17/09
Beautifully written story.There is a reason God tells us to come like children.