The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/09
Very nice storytelling. I was quite involved in the story as I read. Very nicely done!
The essay had nice transitions and a nice ending.
09/10/09
I know its late for a comment but your character in the story would understand!Demands of life etc. I really enjoyed the natural cadance of your words. Sweet story.