The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/09
Touching story, well told.
Blessings to you.
A well written story. Paragraphs would make it easier to read and to stay focused. Good job, overall.
This was a very touching story. You need spaces between paragraphs and there were a couple of punctuation and spacing problems, but the story was great!