The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked this! Thanks!
Descriptive good entry! This could be the beginning of a book!
A nice story.
I'm not sure what you were trying to tell us exactly. I loved how you described the overindulgent husband, but what did you actually see out there in the end? I kinda got lostů.You have something more to say, I think and I would like to read it.
Nicely written. Makes the reader long for more. As Christians we are often required to take off our own glasses and put on Christ's and see others as He does. Thanks for sharing.